‘Aaah, the crimes we commit against punctuation,’ sighed a student, after we concluded the punctuation segment of my Copy Editing class at the Centre for Adult Education in Melbourne this week. This participant works in HR, and complained that too many job applications are so badly punctuated, even the personal pronoun “I” is typed in lower case. And this, by university graduates who would have written regular 1000 word essays! Perhaps I have missed something, and uni students these days are texting their essays. For therein lies a paradox: writing and reading since the digital revolution has exploded, yet our punctuation (and grammar) has imploded.
All I have to say about that is:
A woman, without her man, is nothing.
A woman: without her, man is nothing.
Punctuation can make a big difference to your meaning (and also speaks volumes about the character of the writer behind it — sloppy punctuation signifies sloppy personality).
While we all understand that punctuation gives pause and stress for meaning or expression, even the seasoned writers amongst us have punctuation block with some of the rules of engagement. So let’s now make sure you mean what you punctuate, and you punctuate what you mean with the following refreshers:
The Full Stop is just that, it ends a sentence:
A writer, like a film director, guides the reader with the verbal equivalent of lighting, camera angles and cuts.
It also abbreviates words:
M.D. Medicinae Doctor [Doctor of Medicine]
B.A Bachelor of Arts
A. M. ante meridiem (before noon) | P.M. post meridiem (after noon)
The Question Mark ends a direct question.
If you work for a living, why do you kill yourself working? (The Good, The Bad and the Ugly, 1966 movie)
It also ends an unspoken question:
‘Is this love, is this love, is this love that I’m feeling?’ Bob Marley wondered.
The Exclamation Mark ends an expression of emotion. Use it lightly, and too often, and you’ll come across as hysterical.
I’m So Excited! (Pedro Almodovar 2013 movie)
The Comma is the most important and versatile punctuation mark of all:
It separates sentence connectors:
I was going to write about the music of writing, however, this was a more pressing issue.
It separates attitudinal adjuncts:
Surprisingly, we are less educated about punctuation today that fifty years ago.
It separates introductory phrases:
Without even realising it, texting has returned us to the literary stone age.
It signals additional comments or information:
Pancini adds that, like many working in the field, she believes in the ethical desirability of a more literate society.
It separates items in a list:
The author’s writing is eloquent, engaging, insightful and concise. (no comma before “and” unless you’re American)
The Semi-Colon joins two closely related clauses that could also stand alone as sentences:
Training is everything. The peach was once a bitter almond; cauliflower is nothing but cabbage with a college education. (Mark Twain).
It separates punctuated items in a list:
Poowong, Victoria; Bong Bong, Northern Territory; Humpybong, Queensland; Loos, South Australia; and Nowhere Else, Tasmania.
The Colon is a momentary pause for assessment, introducing further information:
The four most beautiful words in our common language: I told you so. (Gore Vidal)
It also amplifies the word or phrase being introduced:
The stupidity of man can be traced to one cause: ignorance.
It preludes an indented quotation or statement, such as this one from author, Amy Joy:
Anyone who says writing is easy isn’t doing it right.
It follows a clause introducing bullet points:
• Keep sentences short
• Prefer the simple to the complex
• Prefer the familiar word
• Avoid unnecessary words
• Put action in your verbs
• Write like you talk
• Use terms your reader can picture
• Tie in with your reader’s experience
• Make full use of variety
• Write to express, not impress
It’s used for headlines with a sub-head, as well as for citations and ratios:
Sense of Style: The Thinking Person’s Guide to Writing in the 21st Century
The scale of 1:500
The Em Dash is twice as long as a hyphen (PC: hold down ALT key and type 0151 on the numeric keypad. MAC: press Shift-Option and minus key) and signifies an abrupt pause before adding a comment:
Never have I met such a lovely person—before you.
It’s used to enclose extra information:
Please talk to my art director—Nunzio Giuseppe Di Stasio—about the layout design. (Parentheses or commas can also be used).
It’s used as amplification or explanation:
The Beatles were four lads from Liverpool — John, Paul, George and Ringo. (a colon would be used here in formal writing)
The En Dash is shorter than the Em Dash but longer than the Hyphen (PC: hold down ALT key and type 0150 on the numeric keypad. MAC: press Shift-Option and minus key) and used to show spans of figures and dates:
Pages 7–10 | July–October | 1950–2005
It’s used to link words with separate identities:
Australia–Pacific region | Federal–State Agreement
It’s used as a minus sign:
– 4° Celcius | 10 – 4 = 6
The Hyphen joins words into compounds:
Post-9/11, multi-million-dollar project, x-ray, world-class, cutting-edge, state-of-the-art, ground-breaking, two-year-old,
well-meaning, well-behaved, pie-in-the-sky, energy-efficient, $30 million-plus, ultra-modern, high-performance,
50-page publication, cost-benefit analysis, DNA-fingerprinting, long-standing, far-reaching, long-term, T-cell, three-way
It joins prefixes to a word:
Ex-minister, post-modern, self-interest, re-use, semi-rural
It makes a pronunciation of a word clear:
They decided to re-form the band for the benefit concert.
It removes ambiguity:
There were fifty-odd guests at the book launch.
The Apostrophe shows ownership or possession:
It’s used to mark an omission or contraction:
They’re = They are
The ‘90s = (not 90’s) 1990s
It’s = It is (Do not confuse it’s with “its”, the possessive pronoun meaning “belonging to it”)
Rock ‘n’ Roll = Rock and Roll
The Ellipsis uses only three dots and indicates an intentional omission of words in a text:
Marvin the Cat looked up…all he could see was Lucy in the sky with diamonds.
An ellipsis can also be used to indicate a pause in speech, an unfinished thought, or, at the end of a sentence, a trailing off into silence.
When the singer looked out into the audience, she couldn’t quite believe what she saw…
Note that an ellipsis at the end of a sentence is not followed by a full stop.
From One, two, three, four, five, six, seven, eight to nine – spell them out. From 10 and above – use numerals, except at the beginning of the sentence.
Double Quotation Marks are traditionally used for quotes within quotes:
Mrs. Smith told the inquest ‘Mrs. Chamberlain cried “The dingo got my baby”, before she ran to the police.’
Punctuation that belongs to the quotation is enclosed within the quotation marks.
Punctuation belonging to the sentence remains outside the quotation marks.
Always in capital, unless you’re e.e.cummings, in which case capitals don’t exist. And what better way to conclude than with a poem penned and punctuated by e.e.:
i carry your heart with me(i carry it inmy heart)i am never without it(anywherei go you go,my dear;and whatever is doneby only me is your doing,my darling)i fearno fate(for you are my fate,my sweet)i wantno world(for beautiful you are my world,my true)and it’s you are whatever a moon has always meantand whatever a sun will always sing is youhere is the deepest secret nobody knows(here is the root of the root and the bud of the budand the sky of the sky of a tree called life;which growshigher than soul can hope or mind can hide)and this is the wonder that’s keeping the stars aparti carry your heart(i carry it in my heart)